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Hope For the Best

HOPE IN DEPRESSION Adverse ambient turning too bitter. Day by day I hope for the better. Days are pricked by painful splinter. Life seemed to run through litter. When my days will start to glitter? To struggle with intense zeal! Day by day I hope for the better. My sufferings are sure to heal. Hope for the best, hope for future. Depression never be allowed. Sadness must be followed by rapture. Silver lining shining in every cloud. 11/20/17 Rhyme Time II Contest by Laura loo Second Place Rhyme Scheme A-A-A-A-A-B -A-B . Line 2 and Line 7 are same. One final line not rhymed wrapping entire poem

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Date: 11/25/2017 8:25:00 AM
great poem sweet Anisha :) thank you and congrats on 2nd place :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/25/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thanks Laura.Love
Date: 11/24/2017 8:26:00 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/25/2017 12:05:00 PM
thanks Eve.Hugs
Date: 11/22/2017 5:33:00 PM
When life is tough all we can do is hope for the best that things will get better Anisha:-) congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2017 5:07:00 PM
Wonderful write, Anisha - congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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