Anisha Dutta Poet Rhyme

Hope For the Best

HOPE IN DEPRESSION

           Adverse ambient turning too bitter.
           Day by day I hope for the better.
           Days are pricked by painful splinter.
            Life seemed to run through litter.
                                When my days will start to glitter?   
                                To struggle with intense zeal!
                                Day by day I hope for the better.
                               My sufferings are sure to heal.
         Hope for the best, hope for future.
         Depression never be allowed.
         Sadness must be followed by rapture.
          Silver lining shining in every cloud.
 
11/20/17
             Rhyme Time II Contest by Laura loo
    Second Place

 Rhyme Scheme A-A-A-A-A-B -A-B . Line 2 and Line 7 are same.
One final line not rhymed wrapping entire poem

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Beautiful Scars November 25, 2017 at 8:25 AM great poem sweet Anisha :) thank you and congrats on 2nd place :) Anisha Dutta November 25, 2017 at 12:05 PM Thanks Laura.Love

Eve Roper November 24, 2017 at 8:26 PM Anisha, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent! Anisha Dutta November 25, 2017 at 12:05 PM thanks Eve.Hugs

Jan Allison November 22, 2017 at 5:33 PM When life is tough all we can do is hope for the best that things will get better Anisha:-) congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden November 22, 2017 at 5:07 PM Wonderful write, Anisha - congrats on your win, my friend! :-)