Hope Comes In Light Through Shades

wind
river
grain in field
much travelled road
gone

life
labors
working hard
passing by fast
hard

Marty Owens
Turn on the Lanterne contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 10:22 PM
Marty, when I saw the picture, I too saw this idea in it. But I did not think how to say it so eloquently so I chose another route, though I think it's slightly similar idea!
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 10:22 PM
(well, what I mean is that the mood was the same)
Ramsdale Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 4:59 PM
I like this one. Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges Marty. CR
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 1:50 AM
awesome entry for the contest, good luck
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