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The clear sky-blue sky decorated With jet streams like dread locks Horizonal puffs in places Covered by charcoal blocks Such a varied sky crooned by song Of roosters' crows and hens' cackle, an occasional owl's hoot, once where songbirds had been Now fall has captured an audience Somewhat different But life continues into winter More changes efferent Let not winter destroy hope Faith bubbles up from the spring A continuing joy and praise Oh! Heart with gladness sing_

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/22/2016 8:12:00 PM
very nice, Sara. Your imagery was quite cool, especially the jet streams like dread locks.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/23/2016 4:36:00 PM
Andrea, Thanks for the visit..I appreciate the kind review..Sara
Date: 11/29/2016 9:51:00 AM
Yes indeed my friend. There is a reason for the season. Nature has to take some time to rest. She sleeps through the winter and then bursts forth in the Spring refreshed and renewed. Beautifully written and well expressed I give the a big seven. God Bless, JB
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/23/2016 4:23:00 PM
Isn't spring wonderful after a long hard winter..Thanks for the thoughtful comment..Sara
Date: 11/29/2016 2:38:00 AM
Excellent. Very thoughtful write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2016 7:08:00 AM
Ravi, Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you dropping by ..Your presence enhances my work..Sara
Date: 11/27/2016 9:14:00 PM
Weather changes not only nature,but also our mood. Love the poem :-) Hugs Eve
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/28/2016 7:07:00 AM
Eve, For everyone there is some change in mood with the weather and in the changing seasons some so extreme that they have SAD(Seasonal Affective Disorder)..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..Your presence is appreciated..Sara
Date: 11/27/2016 3:02:00 PM
Very nice Sara! I like this! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/28/2016 7:04:00 AM
Heidi, Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate your kind review..Sara