Notes About The Poem

Hope Bubbles Up

The clear sky-blue sky decorated
With jet streams like dread locks
Horizonal puffs in places
Covered by charcoal blocks

Such a varied sky crooned by song
Of roosters' crows and hens'
cackle, an occasional owl's
hoot, once where songbirds had been

Now fall has captured an audience
Somewhat different
But life continues into winter
More changes efferent

Let not winter destroy hope
Faith bubbles up from the spring
A continuing joy and praise
Oh! Heart with gladness sing_  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 8:12 PM
very nice, Sara. Your imagery was quite cool, especially the jet streams like dread locks.
Kendrick Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 4:36 PM
Andrea, Thanks for the visit..I appreciate the kind review..Sara
Ball Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Yes indeed my friend. There is a reason for the season. Nature has to take some time to rest. She sleeps through the winter and then bursts forth in the Spring refreshed and renewed. Beautifully written and well expressed I give the a big seven. God Bless, JB
Kendrick Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Isn't spring wonderful after a long hard winter..Thanks for the thoughtful comment..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 2:38 AM
Excellent. Very thoughtful write. Thanks for sharing it.
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Ravi, Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you dropping by ..Your presence enhances my work..Sara
Roper Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 9:14 PM
Weather changes not only nature,but also our mood. Love the poem :-) Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Eve, For everyone there is some change in mood with the weather and in the changing seasons some so extreme that they have SAD(Seasonal Affective Disorder)..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..Your presence is appreciated..Sara
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Very nice Sara! I like this! :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:04 AM
Heidi, Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate your kind review..Sara
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