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Hope Anew

Hope Anew

I try to keep the gloom at bay
While waiting for your precious birth.
Your beating heart in womb today
Spoke to my ears a wondrous mirth.

The winter wind is cold and brisk.
I’m keeping positive to quell
Fears you and mommy are at risk
In hospital where you must dwell.

Your mommy calls me ev’ry day.
To hear her voice gives me such cheer,
I’ve asked all angels in to pray
To keep both of you safe and near.

You are across the sea from me
Yet close in thought within my mind.
I will keep faith, and hope to see
That all my fears are soon behind.

I wait to welcome you in pink;
A blanket crocheted just for you.
Wish this humble poem I ink
Will give your mommy hope anew.

1-27-20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Neumann Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 4:42 AM
Beautiful.
Laurie Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Hello Connie … what a wonderful poem to recite. Flows so well, and the topic keeps the reader right with you. I trust all is going well - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:42 PM
Yes, my daughter Jennifer, has to stay in the hospital until after her baby is born. They hope for six weeks. Just five weeks left to endure. Thank you Lindsay. Xxoo
Lindley Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 9:09 AM
Praying for your grandchild has a safe arrival and your daughter comes through with fling colors and all are truly and deeply blessed by God, my friend. Perfect title for such a superb and heartfelt new poem! Congrats on your fine win with it. A fav-- a true gem too..
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Thank you very much Robert. She and baby are doing well so far. I truly appreciate the fave. xxoo
Babcock Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 4:34 PM
Hope all is well and sending prayers for your new little one to arrive safely into your daughter's arms. Beautiful poem. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:32 PM
I'm praying that baby has a safe arrival and also for God to watch over the precious mother of the baby. I see you got a top win with this. big congratulations, Connie
Devonshire Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:27 PM
How touching is this beautiful poem, Connie, and I know you have genuine concerns about the birth of your daughter's next baby. I would love to know how Jennifer reacted when she saw this. Excellent writing! A fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 8:59 PM
I am going to print it out and mail it to her Carolyn. She is doing well and today is her 5th day in hospital Carolyn. I need to go shopping for her to buy some necessary things like thermometer etc. I really appreciate the fave. Thank you so much. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Chiri Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 6:37 PM
Connid congrats on your top win!:)
One Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Connie this is a beautiful sad poem...My wife had pre eclampsia with our first child...I hope everything will be fine and my prayers are with your family... An old friend from university had her first child at 42 yes yesterday after many years trying... There is always hope.
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:25 AM
How sweet and beautiful this poem is! Every words spells abundance of love and care. Superb ending stanza--it is a gift. Enjoyed the read, Connie. Best wishes and prayers--you will soon be blessed in wonderful news.
Green Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 7:19 AM
Your poem is beautiful and heart touching and it is my heart that goes out to you, your daughter and your granddaughter. Such a sad feeling washes over me as I read this and your replies to comments below. I have a granddaughter who is 1 1/2 and the cutest little kid I have ever seen. Sending prayers to you and your family.
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 3:56 AM
The arrival of new life always brings great joy Connie. I wish them both well and I'm sure he'll hear your prayers. Tom
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