Hope & Faith

My mommy strike me last night,
But I promise this will be our last fight,
I'm gonna run away to a place that's bright,
And when I'm gone, her feeling's are gonna be contrite,
I'm gonna let her think that my soul's no more on this earth,
She's gonna regret hitting me, and realize what I'm really worth,
I'm fighting back mentally, using my words as a weapon,
Giving her all these emotions, hope it'll teach her a lesson,
My dad did it when i was younger, man I'm so damn blind,
For thinking the people that gave me life, can be so damn kind,
They gave me verbal abuse,
I was a gift, they misused,
Watch me put my finger in the trigger, and just let it all loose,
Unleash the angel of death,
Tell God take away my breath,
I want this pain to end,
Maybe hope and faith, just might be my friend.

[idea and partial credit to sajdah al-riyami]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 4:43 PM
Makes Me Wanna Cry. Have We All Been Through This? Verbal Abuse, Physical Abuse, Mental Abuse, Ive Been Through It All. This Is An Amazing Piece Of Art. Hope And Faith Will Be Your Strongest Friend As Long As You Dont Give Up. Your Stronger Than That, I Know You Are. Dont Give Up Lee.
Chu Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 4:48 PM
My mom is the evil Queen of my worst memories. She was just a victim of tradition. She never took "How to talk to your kids 101". It's not in her nature to talk. It's in her nature to nurse. Bohemian Rhapsody, brah. " Mama ooo, Didnt mean to make you cry. If Im not back again this time tomorrow. Carry on, carry on, as if nothing really matters..."
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 1:09 PM
*.*You really Done it Lee.It friggin Amazin=) " using my words as a weapon"Wow!Thanx again how you remixed my work.Your rap is incredible=)
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