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Hope, a Little Remained

Hope, A Little Remained She walked the creaking floors of the rat-infested room, trying to remember what tragedy had sent her to this shabby place. Her heart felt the desperate pains, that lost love sends in aching waves, praying her sleeping infant does not wake and cry out from its feverish thirst. He paced the cold cell, languishing in deep misery, heart shattered, each step an eternity echoing curses, a testament to his broken pride. Although thousands of miles apart, he felt her loss, never-ending sorrows, dawn would come, priest would take his last confession, yet Hope remained. 7-03-2018 For Silent One's, eight lines of fate, when you wonder if it is too late.

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Debjani Mitra

Date: 8/26/2018 3:59:00 AM

very very touching

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/30/2018 6:23:00 AM

Ahh, such a lovely poem this is, I don't know how I missed it but I am glad that I come across this one,you have given the true justice to the topic" 8 lines of fate, when you wonder if it is too late" good luck my friend and have a really nice day

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2018 4:35:00 PM

To be parted puts both parties in emotional chaos. Hope for a reprieve or hope for her situation to change for the better? I would think a little of both. I loved the sense of empathy in your poem Robert. Poignant and creatively written! : )

Lekau Mamabolo

Date: 7/28/2018 4:15:00 AM

Indeed, hope is a treasure. Interesting poem to read, all the best....Lekau

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 7/28/2018 4:04:00 AM

Very moody and atmospheric. Excellent imagery.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/28/2018 12:31:00 AM

Your imagination grabbed your creativity and together they soared on this write. I was captivated, even felt suspense intense enough to ready it twice. Put this in your "Wow" section! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/27/2018 5:35:00 PM

Hello Robert, Best of Luck in the contest with this entry!! I like the way you have juxtaposed the terrible realities both of these people faced in their separate, but shared situations of true hurt, tragedy, and pain. Superb Work!! Best Always, Gary

Kevin Lawrence

Date: 7/26/2018 9:57:00 AM

"Eternity echoing curses." Wonderful, write, Robert. Absolutely heart wrenching. What could have inspired your deep insight? Thank you, Brother. Kev

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 7/25/2018 2:08:00 PM

Love the final fate of hope, the heavenly suggestion, truly original; a fave Robert;-)

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/26/2018 5:20:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend. Always a true and great pleasure to read your comments, insightful and magnificently creative poetry my good friend! I pray all has been well with you and yours!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/24/2018 10:24:00 PM

Wow! Robert, your deep and poignant poem resonates with emotion that reaches down into my heart and soul. Dynamic and dramatic imagery tenderly adorns your magnificent and moving write. Congratulations on your excellent win with your beautiful poem. Warmest wishes my dear friend.. ~Susan

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/26/2018 5:19:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend. I am blessed to be able to read and learn from so many truly great poets that present their works here! I only which that I could better keep up with the reading, commenting and overall participation at this the very best poetry site/forum on the internet!

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2018 9:42:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Robert. Well done.

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/26/2018 5:13:00 AM

Thank you my friend. God bless.....

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/20/2018 11:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Such a sad, depressing story, a different take on fate, and still a spark of hope. Well done!

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/26/2018 5:10:00 AM

Thank you my friend. God bless.....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/19/2018 7:47:00 AM

- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/20/2018 1:40:00 AM

Thank you my good friend for your kind and generous comment.

Silent One

Date: 7/19/2018 7:21:00 AM

Always keep the hope Robert, sometimes it is all we have.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/20/2018 1:40:00 AM

Thank you my good friend. It was a great pleasure to be inspired to write for your contest!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/4/2018 7:04:00 PM

Such an emotional and deep write Robert, this one has 'Winner' stamped all over it, however I will wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend. Superb as always and a Fave for me....Maria hugs

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/6/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend. I visit your page and read there often to inspire me to compose, as your poetry gifts so very much to its fortunate readers!!

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/4/2018 5:25:00 PM

Eight great lines Robert...written with style and drama...love & light...^WW^

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/6/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Always a pleasure to read your poetry and your kind comments when you visit my page.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/4/2018 7:04:00 AM

Hi Robert, Wishing you luck in the contest, i hope this one does well for you my friend. It matters not what you write my friend. whether it be of the deepest sadness or the most uplifting love, your words ever sing in the stars. Written with such honest emotion Robert. Excellent content, and again, an excellent write. this has to be a fave. Your friend always....Mike.

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/4/2018 11:22:00 AM

Thank you my good friend. So good to hear from you! I see that you have been composing more beautiful poetry yourself! Your poems are always a pleasure to read......