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Hope

Phoenix appears
Arising from fiery flames 
Our hopes are assured

Contest Hope Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron
04~30~16

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2016

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Vladislav Raven

May 4, 2016 at 6:12 PM

Hi Jan, a beautiful Senryu written on the theme of Hope. I didn't place either Jan, in the contest. Hope is one thing i ever have in abundance. Your words are hope and hope is something we shall ever need, it keeps us going forward. Another excellent poem Jan. This is a Seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

May 4, 2016 at 6:17 PM

Thanks Mike as long as I am inspired to write that is the important thing - i have written inspired by the families contest but have no put it in the contest as it is not what the sponsor is after ... but as long as we are creative that is all that matters:-) hugs jan xx

April 30, 2016 at 10:42 PM

I just read Tim's poem, Seems we having a silent BBQ this weekend!

May 1, 2016 at 8:18 AM

My poem is of hope Arthur nothing more nothing less:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 30, 2016 at 6:14 PM

Great job. If they only knew!!!

April 30, 2016 at 6:26 PM

I think they do now lol:-) hugs jan xx

April 30, 2016 at 11:27 AM

Nice composition Jan.Congrats Hugs

April 30, 2016 at 2:34 PM

Thanks Anisha - I didn't place in the contest but am happy with my poem i think it is quite uplifting:-) hugs jan xx

April 30, 2016 at 10:59 AM

I hope this is a strong presidential candidate. We seems to need one. Love, daver

April 30, 2016 at 2:32 PM

I hadn't thought about it in that context Daver but it sure fits the bill for the elections:-) hugs jan xx

April 30, 2016 at 9:53 AM

A great Senryu Jan...love the pic too

April 30, 2016 at 10:50 AM

Thanks Tim - I snook in at no 34 then the contest closed 5 mins later! Hugs Jan xx

April 30, 2016 at 8:30 AM

How fantastic!! I was reminded of Fawkes looking at the picture.. Good luck in the contest, dear Jan; hope this does very well!! :) :)

April 30, 2016 at 8:33 AM

Thanks Sneha:-) I wasn't going to post it until tomorrow then saw there was only two spaces left in the contest! I hope Nayda likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

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