Hope

Tell me would you give me a smile and make me feel okay?

Tell me would you give me the time and really make my day?

Make my day!

And would you hope to be my sunshine?

Such a face could last a lifetime,

and that is my time,

my lifetime with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 6:07 PM
A poem about HOPE! amid all the other stuff posted here. Your first post... I have a long way to go. Your friend, Keith
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October 2, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Gary, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Linney Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 3:12 PM
I meant welcome!
Linney Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Thank you very much for a lovely welcom :)
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October 2, 2015 at 12:34 AM
Gary, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Linney Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 1:32 AM
Hi, thank you very much for the warm welcome! Work beckons at the moment but I will be back a bit later , thanks again!
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