Hope

Many things seen
and not understood
taken for granted
until it's gone

 Seen from a distance
longing for the wind
only to watch it blow away

It's a struggle
to chase the moon
trying to ride a star
only to end up face down
in the dirt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 6, 2009 at 9:03 PM
A strong essence of hope, very descriptive and full of truth...great write I see an enormous potential in you...Raul
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