Hoofs of Remorse

seems you ride a similar hoss, i have a redhead yes of course, but she dumps me in the field of play, and pigroots till she gets away , gotta duck the tomato sauce, and the back hoofs of remorse, little Brumbie's run away...:) thanks David Williams "a pretty red head" Don Johnson
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Brown Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 6:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Don. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 12:16 AM
Don ha ha ha just love it superb mate..Dave
Sivey Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 8:00 PM
This is a wonderful little write my friend! I love the line "and the back hoofs of remorse," quite the fantastic line you have written! Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Cute one...Enjoyed reading this eve..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Sara
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