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Honorable Mentions Worth Mentioning

A Pantoum verse that might be such deep noisome, repeating lines throughout the epic poem. Not worthy getting honorable mention, another utter true misapprehension. In the poem, I tell a story, maybe not a podium, but a doom huge day be! A story of Our Rock, Strength, and Source of Joy" or else receive with pleasure seems to annoy. Had the wisdom to simplify the profound truth stories that are clear to flutter round. Yet, for my best-efforts misapprehension another erudite honorable mention. 5/4/2019
Jesus Christ Our Rock, Strength, and Source of Joy Mary so young, loved her son in her heart Word spread through footprints in the sands with joy His love and compassion will not depart Fear not, I'm here, your heart I will not toy Word spread through footprints in the sands with joy Words of repent and forgiveness of sin Fear not, I’m here, your heart I will not toy Jesus Christ, hungers for your soul within Words of repent and forgiveness of sin On bended knee and pray blessing oneself Jesus Christ, hungers for your soul within Made peace by the sacrifice of himself On bended knee and pray blessing oneself Woven threads of wisdom from a young boy Made peace by the sacrifice of himself Jesus Christ, our rock, strength, and source of joy Poetry Contest: Honourable Mentions worth mentioning. Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 5/12/2019 9:47:00 AM
Hi Eve, this one was supposed to be in third place. I tried to unlock and redo the placement but couldn’t. So sorry, you did this really well. I messed up. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 5/5/2019 7:56:00 AM
It looks like you burned the midnight oil on this one, Eve. I believe this is more weary than an honorable mention.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/5/2019 7:57:00 AM
Forgive me, Eve. I meant more worthy!
Date: 5/4/2019 10:31:00 AM
I found these hard to do Eve but you've written a brilliant pantoum with a clear message. Im sure this will do better than a PM, Good luck Tom.
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