Honeypot

a bird and bee embedded in honey
sticky, thick and rich though poor
a golden age portrait

2/14/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Godwin Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:29 AM
So very clever, nothing sticky about it! All the best ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Thanks CayCay!
Zerlaut Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 3:52 AM
Love it, very sticky poem. I can imagine the annoyance of the bird as it'd have to preen later
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Birds and bees - a metaphor :)
Talbot Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 12:23 AM
Kim, Reminds me of invertebrates trapped in amber, a 'golden age portrait' indeed!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thanks, Mick!
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:40 PM
ahh, so sweet!!! AND sticky. Sticky can sure be nice!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Gauthier Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 4:46 PM
A very sweet poem, Kim. Pun intended.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Thanks, Line ;)
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