Honeypot

a bird and bee embedded in honey sticky, thick and rich though poor a golden age portrait 2/14/2018

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/15/2018 10:29:00 AM

So very clever, nothing sticky about it! All the best ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2018 2:47:00 PM

Thanks CayCay!

Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 2/15/2018 3:52:00 AM

Love it, very sticky poem. I can imagine the annoyance of the bird as it'd have to preen later

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2018 2:48:00 PM

Birds and bees - a metaphor :)

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/15/2018 12:23:00 AM

Kim, Reminds me of invertebrates trapped in amber, a 'golden age portrait' indeed!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2018 2:49:00 PM

Thanks, Mick!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2018 11:40:00 PM

ahh, so sweet!!! AND sticky. Sticky can sure be nice!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2018 2:50:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/14/2018 4:46:00 PM

A very sweet poem, Kim. Pun intended.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2018 7:41:00 PM

Thanks, Line ;)