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A magnificent horse gallops down the cobblestone street. A waterfall - shimmers on their right, with splendiferous colors of a rainbow wall... The chivalrous young man encircles her innocent beauty, he holds their reins. He controls each sight and sound. They glimpse their fair share of mountain peaks and wild flowers. Her eyes dazzle of adventure. Her modern knight charms the day and night, no fear to venture off the breathless path. Somehow she trusts, tirelessly, the sinews of this sublime creature, his mane peerlessly, whipping in the wild wind, speeding with four limbs towards their haven. Arrival at the honeymoon sight, where her tender heart thus gave in, with a ravenous kiss, sensuous show of voluptuous bliss, entirely his. This precious moment held in their minds and wholeheartedly! 3/27/2017 Brenda Chiri's On Any Subject Contest in the form/style of her poem "Words of a Writer" Two rhyming poems in one. Short poem off to the right.

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Date: 3/27/2017 9:55:00 AM
This was gorgeous Kim. I love how you formatted this beautiful poem of love and adventure. This should do well in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 3/27/2017 9:24:00 AM
Amazing write for the contest, Kim:) sounds quite a challenge, you've done it excellently:) should place high, a 7 from me:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jo!

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