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Honeymoon Haven

A magnificent horse gallops down the cobblestone street.
                                                                                   A waterfall -

shimmers on their right, with splendiferous colors of a
                                                                                      rainbow wall...

The chivalrous young man encircles her innocent beauty, he
                                                                                            holds their

reins.  He controls each sight and sound. They glimpse their
                                                                                                fair share
                                                                                                     
of mountain peaks and wild flowers. Her eyes dazzle
                                                                                       of adventure.

Her modern knight charms the day and night, no fear to
                                                                                     venture

off the breathless path.  Somehow she trusts,
                                                                                tirelessly,

the sinews of this sublime creature, his mane
                                                                           peerlessly,

whipping in the wild wind, speeding with four limbs
                                                                               towards their haven.

Arrival at the honeymoon sight, where her tender heart thus
                                                                                               gave in,

with a ravenous kiss, sensuous show of voluptuous bliss,
                                                                                            entirely

his. This precious moment held in their minds
                                                                        and wholeheartedly!


3/27/2017

Brenda Chiri's On Any Subject Contest
in the form/style of her poem "Words of a Writer"
Two rhyming poems in one.  Short poem off to the right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 27, 2017 at 9:55 AM
This was gorgeous Kim. I love how you formatted this beautiful poem of love and adventure. This should do well in the contest.
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March 27, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Daniel Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Amazing write for the contest, Kim:) sounds quite a challenge, you've done it excellently:) should place high, a 7 from me:)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Thanks so much, Jo!
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