Kim Rodrigues Poet Crystalline

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Honey Moon

Duet on the crystalline sea —
    Limelight of the moon circles the waltz.

Beyond the border of the ship,
     the sensation of surrendered selves.

4/29/2019
Crystal Clear 
Sponsor - Joseph May
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Paige Hind September 2, 2024 at 7:28 PM Gorgeous, <3 This enchanted my mind.

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2019 at 2:55 PM I love yours, Kim. I too chose two verses for that same picture . I love that picture and think it evokes the best imagery from the poets! Kim Rodrigues May 11, 2019 at 3:33 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2019 at 12:45 PM - Congratulations on your excellent winning poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2019 at 9:48 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Joseph May May 5, 2019 at 10:19 AM A lovely duet KIm...Congrats on your win.. Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2019 at 9:48 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Sara Kendrick May 1, 2019 at 2:57 PM Good one. Way to go . Reads like a winning entry. Sar Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2019 at 9:10 PM Thank you, Sara! Hugs...Kim

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2019 at 3:28 PM this is awesome, and you even incorporated the title of the form into the poem. I chose this same picture! Love it. Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2019 at 6:18 AM Thank you, Andrea! It is a fun pic! Hugs...Kim

Panagiota Romios April 30, 2019 at 1:12 PM Really love this Panagiota Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2019 at 6:18 AM Thank you, Panagiota! Hugs...Kim

Gershon Wolf April 29, 2019 at 6:24 PM An image and verses that truly sparkle, Kim, as they dance their way toward the winner's circle. Expertly done! :) gw Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2019 at 8:03 PM Thank you so much! I love to cruise!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2019 at 11:50 AM - Lovely and romantic in moonlight, Kim :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2019 at 3:19 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!