Honey Im Home

Honey I'm home..
but only echoes greet me.
the only smiles shown
are broken memories laid anyway but discreetly
silence is my new found spouse
the only weather I notice is my tear soaked blouse
the only thing I hear is mumbled noises from my mouth
the only food in my fridge is fear
I seer and season it it with my blues
everything in here including myself are askew
looking for my honey and all I found was bees
living in a hive of horrors
when once living but a dream
I dont even fight time
without you this life is not mine
still I scream the same question still
looking for my love my honey who has been killed.

1/22/14
B. Maxine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/13/2014 5:41:00 PM
great line looking for honey all i found were bees excellent!..will view more..this title just pulled me in michael
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Date: 8/13/2014 9:18:00 PM
Thank you Michael! Im eager to see what you think on my other poems :)
Date: 2/4/2014 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on this high placement Maxine I hope it is not from personal life, yet if so my deepest sympathy..'
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:23:00 AM
I am drawn into your sadness, the mark of a talented writer. So sorry for your loss. Congratulations on being chosen.
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Date: 2/2/2014 8:47:00 AM
- Congratulations !!!! - well done,Maxine !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2014 6:25:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your fine win. My next contest is "Husbands are in heaven whose wives scold not", Maxine
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Date: 1/28/2014 7:43:00 PM
A very sad, yet poignant trip into a deeply broken heart, missing its piece. Very atmospheric & eerie lines. "The only food in my fridge is fear"...fierce line.
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