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Honey Chil'

Shush my child Sleep awhile Close your eyes My honey baby. Lips so sweet tiny feet Sleep awhile My honey baby Lashes long Red cheeked born Sleep awhile my honey baby. Eyes of blue precious too Sleep awhile my honey baby. Shush my child Sleep awhile Go to dreamland honey baby. When you rise no surprise Ma will kiss Her honey baby. http://www.flutetunes.com/tunes.php?id=109

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John Freeman

Date: 4/3/2010 11:28:00 PM

Awesome Lyric Honey Chil'. Wheres your footle? I wasn't through with mine. Take another look. Agape, Moses

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/3/2010 7:38:00 PM

sway to a Bollywood groove! very cool! Deb! love the hmmmmm! jimbo

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/3/2010 7:23:00 PM

really sweet

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/3/2010 6:38:00 PM

very cute!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2010 6:19:00 PM

I LOVE This one, Deb, it's very lulling like a lullabye should be. By the way, since you mentioned easter candy in your remark to me, I am tagging you for that Easter thing. I will go post my poem now for you to see, it's called Chocolate Rabbit. Keep it going! LUv,Andrea ps I was tagged By Linda. Others that participated were Carol, Sarah, Rueben, can't recall if there were others. Oh, yes, Charma too(or maybe it was Carolyn)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/3/2010 6:17:00 PM

Great write...I just will take your word for it that it goes to the music...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Destiny Budd

Date: 4/3/2010 3:02:00 PM

That's really cute. Very soothing actually. Nice write.

Veronica Joseph

Date: 4/3/2010 2:43:00 PM

very calming, for any child. yet what is the hidden message?