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honey bee

   a lawn mower’s roar

above a yellow flower
  
                         the hovering bee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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James Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 2:26 AM
Wonderful imagery created. Enjoyed and love bees.
Thomas Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 10:59 PM
I really like this Haiku. I can picture the lawnmower and hear its roar, while the honeybee seeks to get pollen from the flower in its path.
Guptar Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Back with heartiest congratulations dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a delightful write. Bee`s bites are said to be beneficial in some way!
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:19 AM
- Great written, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Hind Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 4:41 PM
Very "sweet"- I love bumblebees but not so much wasps! :) - the lawn mower image worked well
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