Honey Bee

I see you honey bee 
on humming erratic flight 

on route to the garden bed 
crash-landing on petals bright 

burying head first into a flower 
tumbling in the pollen white 

vibrating noisily with purpose  
then launching out with pollen tight 

weighed down with your sweet cargo 
buzzing loudly in delight 


9 August 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/4/2022 1:33:00 PM
I think this is a nice poem. Well done!
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/4/2022 3:23:00 PM
Thank you very much John :)
Date: 8/9/2022 11:07:00 AM
British Columbia researcher Alison McAfee reported that when temperatures reach about 107-degrees Fahrenheit, drone bees convulse, causing their sex organs to explode and they then die from shock. She claims drones are the most effective indicators of climate change! Woe unto us! Aloha!
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Julie Draper
Date: 8/9/2022 1:03:00 PM
Poor wee bees!
Date: 8/8/2022 4:54:00 PM
Bees keep our eyes busy as well! Nice!
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/4/2022 1:46:00 PM
Apologies Kim. They were meant to be exclamation marks not question marks. Technology argh.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2022 6:23:00 PM
Of course encouragement!
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Julie Draper
Date: 8/8/2022 5:12:00 PM
Thanks! I love bees. I appreciate your encouragement ??.
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