Honey Bee

I see you honey bee on humming erratic flight on route to the garden bed crash-landing on petals bright burying head first into a flower tumbling in the pollen white vibrating noisily with purpose then launching out with pollen tight weighed down with your sweet cargo buzzing loudly in delight 9 August 2022

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John Blake

Date: 9/4/2022 1:33:00 PM

I think this is a nice poem. Well done!

Julie Draper
Date: 9/4/2022 3:23:00 PM

Thank you very much John :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/9/2022 11:07:00 AM

British Columbia researcher Alison McAfee reported that when temperatures reach about 107-degrees Fahrenheit, drone bees convulse, causing their sex organs to explode and they then die from shock. She claims drones are the most effective indicators of climate change! Woe unto us! Aloha!

Julie Draper
Date: 8/9/2022 1:03:00 PM

Poor wee bees!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/8/2022 4:54:00 PM

Bees keep our eyes busy as well! Nice!

Julie Draper
Date: 9/4/2022 1:46:00 PM

Apologies Kim. They were meant to be exclamation marks not question marks. Technology argh.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2022 6:23:00 PM

Of course encouragement!

Julie Draper
Date: 8/8/2022 5:12:00 PM

Thanks! I love bees. I appreciate your encouragement ??.