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Homeward Bound Lyrics Contest Submission

I am newborn,
eyes just opened...
Can you tell me where I am?

I am so cold,
I am trembling...
Can you warm me with your hand?

Will you love me?
Love forever?
Will you tend to me 
so I can grow?

I am tender,
I need someone...
If you can love me
let me know.   

Hallelieu...
hallelujah
hallelu-jah 
to my soul's song.  

Hallelieu...
I am about to go.
So, please don't forget my song.

I'm in motion,
room is spinning...
Mommy's dying,
I cry, "Don't go!"  

I am so scared,
please don't leave me...
I just got here, just come unwound.  

Tell me, Jesus
can I come too
if my mother's homeward bound?
I am begging, I am praying...
If you take her, take me too.

Hallelieu...
hallelujah
hallelu-jah 
it's my soul's song.  

Hallelieu...
So, please don't forget my song.
I just need to be with her.

I am homeward, I am homeward
thank you Jesus, I am with her.
So thankful we're together,
thankful, I'm with her.

Hallelieu...
hallelujah
hallelu-jah 
it's my soul's song.  

Hallelieu...
So, please don't forget my song.
I just need to be with her.

I just need to be with her....


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Date: 11/20/2015 11:10:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with these superb lyrics red b!
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:06:00 PM
Red B, Congratulations on your Homeward Bound win. SKAT
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Red Barchettadrive
Date: 11/20/2015 10:56:00 PM
Thanks SKAT!
Date: 11/20/2015 12:20:00 PM
absolutely heartbreaking lyrics Red - congrats on your win this was an incredibly challenging contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Red Barchettadrive
Date: 11/20/2015 10:57:00 PM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 10/24/2015 12:59:00 AM
Such a sad song...an extreme sad song...to loose mother and child together..But the bond remains after death so it seems ..that is hopeful. Original as ever R. - C.C
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Red Barchettadrive
Date: 11/20/2015 10:57:00 PM
Thanks CC!

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