homecoming hiku

pastel petals d
                     a n 
                     c 
                         e 
as  blades  of jade  yawn 
                               and g l e a m ~
spring's soft h o m e
                             c o 
                              m i 
                             n 
                                g 

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Date: 5/15/2025 2:26:00 PM
IE, definitely here and most welcome...Spring that is. Smiles!!
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Date: 5/14/2025 7:46:00 PM
Big congrats. Well deserved win
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Date: 5/14/2025 10:50:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 5/14/2025 8:58:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Ink. No one can write haikus like this. <3
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Date: 5/13/2025 3:47:00 PM
So creative. I just know you have many other ideas incubating!
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Date: 5/13/2025 1:08:00 PM
I am loving the read and writing of these hikus! So freeing! A lovely shape!
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Date: 5/13/2025 10:54:00 AM
Hello InkEmpress, I could see the petals dancing as I read the poem. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2025 10:09:00 AM
Hello Ink Express, Your welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/13/2025 7:34:00 PM
Thats so sweet of you to say that! Thank you so very much truly
Date: 5/13/2025 9:43:00 AM
Oooo petals dancing n jades yawing.. such elegance in just a few lines … u bring a gorgeous grace to this haiku papi..
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/13/2025 7:33:00 PM
Awwn thank you papi
Date: 5/13/2025 9:03:00 AM
This is so sublime..I love the "spring's soft homecoming". So nostalgic! A FAVE!!!! . Stay sweet! ^__^ JCB
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/13/2025 9:15:00 AM
Awwn thank you sweet soul! I appreciate you! And im so happy to see you are back here on soup posting more! We need poets like you here more! grateful truly! Sending you light always
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JCB Brul
Date: 5/13/2025 9:05:00 AM
and the blades of jade that yawn...oh!!! so cuteeeee!!!
Date: 5/13/2025 8:04:00 AM
I’m not a fan haikus, but you make it very interesting . Love it
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/13/2025 8:11:00 AM
I thought u loved them! Ah they are fun hah thank you dahlin
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