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Whether or not to touch her hand Is the pertinent question now She led me once to a slumbering gorge Made me dive into it And I was completely drenched With the soothing fountain that Lay there untroubled for millenniums I feel doubtful Whether she really showed me the face of the ancient Banyan tree, engulfed in its serene silence Whether made me listen to the rumbles Of the long-lost rivulet Still I find the shelter for The homeless bird in her eyes

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Date: 8/31/2014 3:52:00 PM
This is STRONG and GOOD writing I am seeing here. More intelligent than most! VERY Nicely done.
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 8/31/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 8/31/2014 9:53:00 AM
Good poem although I think my minds a bit slow right now because I'm a bit confused at what your saying so could you explain it plzz?
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Date: 8/31/2014 3:50:00 PM
Ok now I get it thanks :)
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 8/31/2014 11:20:00 AM
The nature of love always borders on mysticism; at the very outset it never allows either one of them to be too sure of the inner cravings of the heart; therefore, the structured confusion. Anyway, love is like the Nest where everyone returns at the end of the day.Thanks

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