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I wrote about my timer,
Which is permanently stuck
And, after many years, at last
Emitted its last cluck.

That was two days ago; today
A package came for me.
I hadn’t ordered anything
And thought, “What could it be?”

A brand-new chicken timer
With a message from my son:
“I hope this works – it looks just like
Your now non-ticking one.”

I laughed out loud at such a gift,
So generous and sweet
And in response to what I wrote! – 
An unexpected treat.

Of course, my husband had to add,
When seeing where this led,
“Your next poem should describe our car
And how it’s almost dead.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 9:24 PM
How thoughtful of your son, Ilene... And as for husbands -- That's what they are for, eh? Smiles, gw
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 1:15 PM
I knew you would get a replacement chicken lol what a thoughtful and 'timely' gift - am waiting for the dead car poem now and see if that has the same result lol:-) hugs jan xx
Brotherton Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 9:30 AM
Such a thoughtful gift. I hope the car trick works.
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