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I wrote about my timer, Which is permanently stuck And, after many years, at last Emitted its last cluck. That was two days ago; today A package came for me. I hadn’t ordered anything And thought, “What could it be?” A brand-new chicken timer With a message from my son: “I hope this works – it looks just like Your now non-ticking one.” I laughed out loud at such a gift, So generous and sweet And in response to what I wrote! – An unexpected treat. Of course, my husband had to add, When seeing where this led, “Your next poem should describe our car And how it’s almost dead.”

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Date: 4/27/2025 9:24:00 PM
How thoughtful of your son, Ilene... And as for husbands -- That's what they are for, eh? Smiles, gw
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Date: 4/19/2025 1:15:00 PM
I knew you would get a replacement chicken lol what a thoughtful and 'timely' gift - am waiting for the dead car poem now and see if that has the same result lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2025 9:30:00 AM
Such a thoughtful gift. I hope the car trick works.
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