Kelly Deschler Poet Rhyme

Home Sweet Home

My home sweet home be, by a salt water taffy sea
Where I dream dreamy dreams of whipped creams,
From a pillow of marshmallow on a bed of Jell-O
Under a bedspread of gingerbread, iced in red,
My doors and floors made of graham cracker s'mores 
And gumdrops, lollipops and candy-coated rooftops.



(December, 6th, 2022)

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MD Johnson December 12, 2022 at 7:30 AM Sweet! Congratulations. — MDJ Kelly Deschler February 12, 2023 at 9:58 AM Thank you so much :)

Christuraj Alex December 12, 2022 at 6:32 AM Fantastic! Congratulations! Kelly Deschler February 12, 2023 at 9:58 AM Thank you!

Gordon Mcconnell December 9, 2022 at 11:17 AM Great penning Kelly, with nice imagery and insightfulness. Blessings,Gordon Kelly Deschler January 29, 2023 at 10:09 AM Thank you, Gordon... I'm pleased that you enjoyed this one!

John Gondolf December 8, 2022 at 1:02 PM What a "sweet" poem, Kelly. I like your use of the internal rhymes, it really makes this poem pop. I enjoyed reading it. John Kelly Deschler January 26, 2023 at 10:42 AM Thanks, John... I'm pleased that you enjoyed this one!

Harry Horsman December 7, 2022 at 12:33 AM Wow, And i'm on a diet. A poem as good as sunshine, Kelly. Love it... Kelly Deschler January 24, 2023 at 9:50 AM Thanks, Harry... I'm pleased that you enjoyed this one!