Home of the Tortoise (Haiku)

The load is heavy, 
for one who carries his home 
on his back, always
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 2, 2008 at 5:47 PM
What an interesting thought! This is such a creative poem. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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August 30, 2008 at 4:10 PM
Oh my, so very true. Never thought about it that way. Very clever. Love Heidie
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August 29, 2008 at 7:11 AM
Adell, this is an awesome haiku! One of my favorites. Well done! Love, Shar
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August 29, 2008 at 2:07 AM
These words are worth more than gold. I like the philosophy in this haiku. Great job! ~ Joseph
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