John Loving Iii Poet I do not know?

Home Life Haiku

penny for your thoughts
i'm fixin to B#%@H like hell
trouble at home oh well

somebodys been here
i can smell her cheap perfume
it's in my bedroom

where is the money
i kinda spent it honey
kinda get it back

where were you tonight
me and the boys watched the fight
not this late at night

is'nt it a shame
you can go back where you came
all your lies are lame

you got me all wrong
i ain't blind and or stupid
you got sence use it

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Anne Rutherford May 4, 2011 at 4:33 PM John you have been busy , I don't remember this from lulu. I really like 3 and 4 ,they are great haiku poems.If you take out the I in 3 and in 4 Make it ,boys and I watched the fight. you will have perfect haiku poems. And to your ?. after poetry.com all was still there even the ratings. Anne

Poet Destroyer A April 23, 2011 at 9:52 PM well tell it like it is... glad i thought of nickles instead.... you have a wonderful style John.. i love reading your poems, I think i will do it more often..lol.. ditto...take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

Phyllis Babcock March 7, 2011 at 10:20 AM This is a witty series of Haiku John. Enjoyed the read this afternoon. phyl

Charlotte Puddifoot March 4, 2011 at 11:03 AM haha having a domestic?

Nette Onclaud March 3, 2011 at 7:54 PM oh john, you are a creative comic and poet... fun thouches all around! :) huggs, nette

The Situation March 3, 2011 at 3:20 PM very funny. T.S.