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Blueberry-cream waves make sweet this bitter journey carry this load home

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2014 1:31:00 PM

wow, wow! This is a bittersweet haiku. The imagery is hard to swallow. However, I knew this journey once before... xox~ Linda

Nikkia Roberts
Date: 4/3/2014 3:28:00 PM

Sad but true. Now, I dare to hope! :-) Thanks for the feedback. Keep it coming!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2014 5:09:00 PM

I love it. // paul

Nikkia Roberts
Date: 4/3/2014 3:29:00 PM

Paul, thanks! I respect your writing, so your compliment means a lot. :-)