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Blueberry-cream waves
make sweet this bitter journey
carry this load home
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April 3, 2014 at 1:31 PM
wow, wow! This is a bittersweet haiku. The imagery is hard to swallow. However, I knew this journey once before... xox~ Linda
Roberts Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Sad but true. Now, I dare to hope! :-) Thanks for the feedback. Keep it coming!
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April 1, 2014 at 5:09 PM
I love it. // paul
Roberts Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 3:29 PM
Paul, thanks! I respect your writing, so your compliment means a lot. :-)
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