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smell of cucumbers,boiled bacons
choking in my heart
like my mamma's soul
with the melancholy of our
kitchenwall

characterdepressionmissing youmomhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

April 27, 2020 at 4:06 PM

this is wonderful and nostalgic.

Skat A

December 27, 2015 at 2:34 PM

SNEHA, HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK 2016

Sneha Nair

March 25, 2016 at 1:06 PM

thanks skat, for your support and encouragement.happy easter

Hannington Mumo

May 16, 2015 at 12:19 AM

Mama and home are often remembered together, and this poem is not hesitant to note this fact. Well-expressed and nostalgically captivating. 777+++!!

Poet Destroyer A

May 9, 2015 at 7:13 PM

Sneha, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Paul Callus

May 9, 2015 at 5:42 PM

A short yet impressive and touching poem, Sneha. Hope to read more of your poetry. // paul

Skat A

May 9, 2015 at 5:05 PM

Sneha, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jan Allison

May 9, 2015 at 4:17 PM

Beautiful but sad Sneha a such feeling of longing and sadness:-( Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 9, 2015 at 2:01 PM

- Dear Sneha - I wish you a warm welcome to the P- Soup! - I look forward to many new poems from you in the future :) - here we are together to learn from each other, none are "experts" :) - Write from your heart and share your thoughts :) - A small greeting from Norway to India // Anne-Lise :)

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