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smell of cucumbers,boiled bacons
choking in my heart
like my mamma's soul
with the melancholy of our
kitchenwall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/27/2015 2:34:00 PM
SNEHA, HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK 2016
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Date: 3/25/2016 1:06:00 PM
thanks skat, for your support and encouragement.happy easter
Date: 5/16/2015 12:19:00 AM
Mama and home are often remembered together, and this poem is not hesitant to note this fact. Well-expressed and nostalgically captivating. 777+++!!
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Date: 5/11/2015 5:25:00 PM
Hi Sneha.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give any of the varied contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes this month! Please take time to check me out, ok... PS.. If you have any questions about the Soup feel free to ask, just send me a Soup Mail. Talk soon!
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:13:00 PM
Sneha, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/9/2015 5:42:00 PM
A short yet impressive and touching poem, Sneha. Hope to read more of your poetry. // paul
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Date: 5/9/2015 5:05:00 PM
Sneha, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/9/2015 4:17:00 PM
Beautiful but sad Sneha a such feeling of longing and sadness:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2015 2:01:00 PM
- Dear Sneha - I wish you a warm welcome to the P- Soup! - I look forward to many new poems from you in the future :) - here we are together to learn from each other, none are "experts" :) - Write from your heart and share your thoughts :) - A small greeting from Norway to India // Anne-Lise :)
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