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Praying for better days, praying for another way. For I've gone astray, unable to see the light of day , who to call, can someone come help. No sense of direction, no energy, I have nothing left in me. My hands are folded, my mind is roaming, my heart is full, my soul is loaded. So now I've come to my stopping point. I'm tired, I need rest, my soul is stress, overall I'm depressed. I refuse to make another step, for I'm determined to get back where I need to be. Too many mistakes, so many problems, has caused me pain, no sunshine, nothing but rain. So someone please help me, show me the way, guide me to the place that I belong. Guide Me Home

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Date: 5/21/2011 5:54:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Audrey. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2011 10:00:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your amazing creative write tonight..hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv..
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Date: 5/20/2011 7:45:00 PM
WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP. this was a very tender and warm piece you wrote and thank you for posting it here on soup. You can't go wrong by praying until the answer comes and it will come.
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:44:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup,i believe everyone could gain from reading your work, thanks for sharing
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:11:00 PM
Your expression in this write are very Interesting..... I enjoyed reading... Sincerely LaKisa,
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:33:00 PM
Very creative and pleasant write on home with feelings, Audrey
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