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an unpacked suitcase is sitting in my room the quiet side street in front of the house broken the sky outside my window a highway to the stars

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Date: 10/11/2024 10:28:00 PM
A somewhat lonely poem, - yet your line ' 'the sky outside my window a highway to the stars' seems to be a wanted solution'. hope so! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/10/2024 6:57:00 AM
Thought-provoking. Great imagery that doesn’t explain the moment. Love the alliteration.
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Date: 10/4/2024 11:53:00 AM
I enjoy this poem that magnetizes my mind to the many stories that can be created from this vignette. It is intriguing.
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