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an unpacked suitcase is sitting in my room
the quiet side street in front of the house broken
the sky outside my window a highway to the stars
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Proxenos Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 10:28 PM
A somewhat lonely poem, - yet your line ' 'the sky outside my window a highway to the stars' seems to be a wanted solution'. hope so! Blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Thought-provoking. Great imagery that doesn’t explain the moment. Love the alliteration.
Greenhough Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 11:53 AM
I enjoy this poem that magnetizes my mind to the many stories that can be created from this vignette. It is intriguing.
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