Holly Shrub

sun brings holly shrub out of night's dark shadows Mosquitoes swarm

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/27/2012 12:58:00 PM

Spose them critters want to kiss neath the holly? Enjoyed, Sara. Love, daver

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/27/2012 10:32:00 AM

never seen a holly shrub here in Mn...good work, Sara! jimbo

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 9/27/2012 12:08:00 AM

lovely poem

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/26/2012 9:54:00 PM

Or as the southerners say skeeters. Like the Holly shrub but not the sting of the skeeters. Nice Haiku

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2012 9:47:00 PM

I just love reading your haiku like this one. This is so cool!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2012 3:49:00 PM

I'm glad they do not live in Norway. Good haiku Sara. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/26/2012 3:30:00 PM

Ah yes, those darn mosquitoes, I really do hate them! But I do have to say that I'm not a prime target of them...they usually don't bite me! I love what you have done here with this write my friend! This is a wonderfully superior write! What a exceptional piece, Great Work!!