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Holly

She shivers under a thick blanket twisted limbs seeking sympathy she envisions twinkling lights and the cinnamon scent of Christmas candles watching lovers’ mistletoe kisses melt ~ * ~ hush nearby approaching snowy footsteps and loving whispers puffs of billowing breath the joy of two newlyweds searching for holiday spirit as heavy branches sigh in relief

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Date: 12/21/2023 9:48:00 PM
It is my first time reading you rhoda, I absolutely love the shape and warmth of this nonet. Although im not a very festive person and dont always appreciate festive poems, yours made my heart melt. With such detailed imagery. Beautiful! Congratulations on your win, thank you for your support. Hope holidays treat you well
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/25/2023 6:32:00 PM
Thank you kindly
Date: 12/21/2023 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the nonet contest
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/25/2023 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Silent
Date: 12/18/2023 1:25:00 PM
Heh Rhoda, I hope you are well... well love the design here that must have been difficult... but I love the poem also and the fine choice of words to create it..
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/25/2023 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Dearheart
Date: 12/17/2023 5:31:00 PM
nicely said -
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/25/2023 6:34:00 PM
Thank you Mat
Date: 12/17/2023 2:59:00 PM
Hey Roadster nice to see you still at it with this lovely nonet
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/25/2023 6:34:00 PM
Thank you Tom

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