Hollow Points

Tommy was recalled
Cars throughout the playroom sprawled….
With lead chips she crawled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Very funny, Robb! Way to go.
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Nice write with good images and quite frolicsome, Robb
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