Hollow

Hollow my love 
And hollow I be 
All hail the love 
That took it from me 

She made what I am 
From time to time 
She’s mainly the reason
I lost my mind 

I don’t know what’s right 
I don’t know what’s wrong 
I can’t even sing
What was once our song

I can’t even write 
A sentence or two
Without ever thinking 
A thought of you

So get out of my head
Now start to run
You’ll hide from me 
Like you hid from the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 16, 2009 at 12:41 AM
These are all considered quatrains...Raul
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