James Stevenson Poet Lyric

Hollow

I hang my head a dripping tear, you pull away ,
         The lonliness , my only fear
I'm feeling shallow and so hollow ,
the feelings I have so hard to swallow .
A twisted heart my broken mind,
   I am the pain that's been refined.
My sadness brews like no tomorrow .
filling my veins  so full of sorrow.
   I'm blacking out  or so it seems,
it's like a needle so full of dreams..




                                     James Stevenson............................

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Carolyn Devonshire February 13, 2009 at 12:26 PM James, Wow! "A needle full of dreams!" Why does it take such sorrow to bring out the best in artists?

Derrick Burton January 31, 2009 at 11:38 AM wow, you are spilling out your heart of the moment and gives this poetry life. enjoyed reading it and have pleasant day. also check my latest poetry.

Laurie Ginn January 24, 2009 at 3:36 PM So full of extreme pain and sadness. So many beautiful lines, great job. Laurie

Donna Golden January 24, 2009 at 3:19 PM James, this is so full of pain and emotion...I can feel it. Very well done. Donna G.