Hollering Earth

Gilded with gold  foil
disfigured for most twilight
In the August Heat.




Written; August 11, 2021

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Kim Rodrigues

August 12, 2021 at 3:15 PM

Ooh…Lasaad, I can feel the emotion!

Sara Kendrick

August 12, 2021 at 2:34 PM

Yes, the August heat is really hard but it hasn't been quite as bad as it is sometimes nor as good as it is sometimes this year. We have seen some very hot and humid Augusts and some hot and dry and some that were blessed with the cooling effect of tropical storms or hurricanes. We are expecting to have one come this way maybe the first part of the week. Thanks for the time you spent commenting at my poem. I appreciate your presence there. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 12, 2021 at 3:25 AM

We stumble from one crisis to another. Climate change is happening far quicker than anyone thought possible. It's a disaster...Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 11, 2021 at 1:09 PM

- Excellent haiku, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet

August 11, 2021 at 2:32 PM

Thanks, dear Anne-Lise, your comment is so much appreciated// Hugs and kindest wishes

David Kavanagh

August 11, 2021 at 10:13 AM

Hello Lasaad Possibly alluding to all the wildfires around the world, as several big ones rage across the continents, warping and disfiguring the night sky, excellent imagery, cheers David

Sotto Poet

August 11, 2021 at 2:31 PM

Your comment is much appreciated, David; as you can see, the earth faces catastrophic fire damage on all sides. The data is consistent, and it's strongly believed that global warming is the primary cause of this current crisis—deepest regards.