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Once upon a time Lived a child's rhyme The magic we believe Every Christmas Eve Tucked into my bed Prayers all said Comfy, cozy, warm Gentle kiss from Mom Door open just a bit Window candles lit Couples now arrive House becomes alive Voices all drift near Name them as I hear Doorbell keeps ringing Wishes they're bringing All shed their jackets Such a happy racket My parents' best folks Sharing stories, jokes Finger foods and eats Eggnog, fondue, treats Food utensils clink Ice cubes in drinks Laughter by the barrel Stereo playing carols Footsteps in the hall A joyous time for all Listen for Dad's laugh (And his better half) Such comfort to hear They're happy and near Colors, shadows, more Dance under my door House of Christmas joy A drowsy, happy boy Mind drifts off to sleep In a memory I'll keep To warm me in the cold And write a poem of ... When I'm old. ~ 4th Place ~ in the "Fairy Tale For Children Poetry Contest", Eve Roper, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/13/2017 7:20:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Greg, I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love this very imaginative write ... Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! I have trouble being economic with my words and stanzas, so I decided to do this one around five syllables a line, to give it a more child-like quality, and it was fun ... also loved going back to that wonderful memory of my folks' Christmas Eve party ... great memories. Thank you for your honor and appreciation - blessings!

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