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Quote: ““May your Holi be as colorful as a rainbow and as joyful as a child’s laughter.”—unknown Underneath the vibrant sky, As colors dance and spirits fly, I sing a song of love to you, My heart, forever painted true. In the embrace of Holi's delight, I'm captivated by your radiant light. With every splash of color, I see, The beauty of our love, endlessly. Like the blossoming flowers in bloom, Our love shines brighter, defying gloom. In every hue, I find your grace, A love that time cannot erase. As we dance amidst the joyful crowd, Our love sings out, clear and loud. With every step, our hearts align, In this celebration, forever entwined. So let us paint our love with joy, Like the colors that Holi employs. In this festival of love and cheer, Forever, my beloved, I'll hold you near.

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Date: 3/26/2024 9:48:00 AM
The rhythm with the rhyme makes the poem as beautiful as the festival of colors. The element of love goes perfectly with the mood of the poem.
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Date: 3/24/2024 7:56:00 PM
I have friends who took part of this festival in my area. They say it is wonderful, just as you described it.
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Date: 3/24/2024 6:37:00 PM
Hello Jay, your poem wonderfully captures the essence of love and joy in the celebration of colors. The imagery of skies and dancing spirits reflects the exuberance of the festival. Your words are filled with warmth and affection, expressing a deep connection between two hearts amidst the festivities. It's a delightful reminder of the enduring beauty of love and the joy it brings. This is colorful and heartfelt piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/24/2024 5:13:00 PM
Fabulous rhyme scheme and such a colorful and uplifting poem with splendid imagery! I especially liked: In the embrace of Holi's delight, I'm captivated by your radiant light. With every splash of color, I see, The beauty of our love, endlessly. Just splendid, Jay. Have a great evening, Sara
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