Holes In My Shoes

I keep getting holes in my shoes,
and even though I look at reality and shake:
I tell myself that changes are quickly coming
to stop me from wishing;
and what I learn from every mistake...
gives me a chance I can't lose! 

There's no perfection instilled in us,
we'll be tempted and will fall,
but not all will rise to face the new tomorrow;
its a hurdle to make life dull,
and if we are strong enough...  
lady luck will smile to make amends before long! 

I keep getting holes in my shoes,
and be ridiculed for trying something new;
before I took a step back,
and did I have a terrible set-back?
I lost many friends, and the truest one knew:
that persistence wasn't the reason for my blues! 

Just before yesterday I saw those old friends,
and they smiled...as if nothing ever happened;
and to my surprise, they shake my hand 
and truly wished me well with a friendly voice!
Look! It was worth getting holes in my shoes,
taking a step forward without feeling any bruise!  

Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your Fabulous poetry being featured this week Andrew. Love, Carol
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March 11, 2009 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations Andrew on the featuring of "Holes In My Shoes." Vince
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March 10, 2009 at 3:13 PM
congrats on your wonderful poetry being featured this week!....MJ*
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March 9, 2009 at 5:20 PM
This is a nice write and true friendship always shines through. Thank you for your kind words on my writing, and many blessings to you. Congratulations on being featured it is well deserved. This piece reminds me that even though nothing in my life is perfect it is pefect for me. It is good to be reminded to appreciate all that we have even our shoes that are filled with holes. Smiles from Lolita
Mason Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 4:40 PM
Thought-provoking write here, Andrew and love the repetition of the title through the poem! Very well done and a good choice to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!
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March 9, 2009 at 11:50 AM
Andrew - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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March 9, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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March 9, 2009 at 1:01 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Andrew.Rgds Brian
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March 8, 2009 at 7:45 PM
Andrew - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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March 8, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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