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Holding On

I know this is real, I’m spinning in circles again, I don’t know which way to turn, Or if I should turn at all, Because I’m still holding on, I never let go, I remember the rain, The ever-biting cold, I fought it off through the night, With naught but your smile in my heart, And I’d do it again, A thousand more times, If you so much as hinted, That it meant something to you… I love you…

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Date: 3/23/2010 10:32:00 AM
you are just so good at writing poetry!!
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Date: 3/2/2010 8:53:00 AM
wonderful poem here and i know i have felt this before, oh i forgot you have soupmail.
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Date: 1/20/2010 2:20:00 PM
wonderfully penned! keep it up! ------Ell
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Date: 9/29/2009 11:57:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Nicely written.
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Date: 9/29/2009 10:07:00 AM
James - welcome to poetry soup. This is a lovely poem and reminds of a rainy night when my husband and I first met and we shared his umbrella. Keep up the lovely writing. Best wishes Janette
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