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Holding On

Bitter sorrow, cries Have fallen on deaf ears Remain silent, Never

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Michael Jordan

Date: 2/6/2009 6:01:00 AM

Tyesha - This is a excellent haiku - I just loved the ending - Keep me informed about your brothers progress ok - God Bless, MJ

Jen H.

Date: 2/3/2009 10:45:00 AM

Each word, in this was bursting with emotion. You really connected well, don't worry you'll get through this. Thanks for all of the comments. ~Jen~

Date: 2/1/2009 3:12:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Much said in these few words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my haiku. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/1/2009 10:01:00 AM

I'm with you Tyesha, crying with no one to comfort or understand is even more painful. Good writing. loveudo, Laurie

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 2/1/2009 6:50:00 AM

This write shows very deep emotions.. great haiku. I feel as though I can relate to this today and that is what makes wonderful poetry. :) Lucinda

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/1/2009 6:48:00 AM

Powerful haiku! Well done as it is also what is not said that makes for great poetry. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/31/2009 11:32:00 PM

Nice haiku Tyesha and thanks for your comments...Raul