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Holding On

Bitter sorrow, cries
Have fallen on deaf ears
Remain silent, Never

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Michael Jordan

February 6, 2009 at 6:01 AM

Tyesha - This is a excellent haiku - I just loved the ending - Keep me informed about your brothers progress ok - God Bless, MJ

Jen H.

February 3, 2009 at 10:45 AM

Each word, in this was bursting with emotion. You really connected well, don't worry you'll get through this. Thanks for all of the comments. ~Jen~

February 1, 2009 at 3:12 PM

The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Much said in these few words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my haiku. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen