Hold Up the Sky

HOLD UP THE SKY
When the nights are starless and the days cloudy Journey through vale of life isn’t what it’s meant to be When the flowers turn pallid and the trees brown On barren garden trail in secret tears of toil hopes drown. When the road you travel is sorely long and the time finite At the end of the dark tunnel of turmoil don’t see the light When you’re in the wasteland in stormy nights of destiny The splintered sky is falling all around you, you sadly see. Without questioning the supreme designer and His ways Wait for the glitter of the starry nights and the sunny days Without complaint take the transient time of His as it is Wait for the spring of the smiling flowers and the green trees. If under falling sky your broken dreams lie in dejected debris Travel within, search the soul and the divine light you’ll see Surrender totally to His power, His will you devoutly comply And you’ll get the inner strength you need to hold up the sky.
Written : March 18, 2019 March 31, 2020 Contest : Strand Choice V, Any Form, Any Theme Sponsor : Brian strand

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Date: 4/1/2020 6:26:00 AM
Eloquent lines you have written with such Grace—beautiful poetry here, Subimal. Congratulations on your win. JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/31/2020 8:34:00 PM
Oh, yes! I remember this winning gem you wrote for my contest, Subimal:-) Congratulations for yet another podium win!
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Date: 6/16/2019 7:53:00 PM
Subimal wonderful poem! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/15/2019 6:44:00 PM
Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 4/1/2019 12:15:00 PM
I absolutely love the way you ended this poem Subimal! No matter how many dark days we go through it is a blessing knowing we can hold on to the hope and faith that brighter days will be forth- coming. Congratulations on having this gem rated high! xxoo ; )
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/5/2019 12:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie for your encouraging comments. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/24/2019 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved 2nd place win in my contest, Subimal:-) Well-done. I love the last line!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/27/2019 1:30:00 AM
Thank you, Ibeh for the placement.
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