Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Hold Tight

Hold tight you said, as I was spread across your handlebars 
Don’t go so fast I screamed, my smile was fixed just like a mask
Increasing speed I feared this ride could be my very last 
Then swiftly we began to rise up in the skies amongst the stars
Whilst riding past the fullest moon upon his bike we saw ET 
Come home he called, just follow me, a chance to meet my family
Hold tight you said, as I was spread across your handlebars

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Written 16th October 2019

Contest Name: Make it Seven
Sponsor: Joseph May

Contest Strand Pick E
Sponsor Brian Strand 
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Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2019 at 12:15 PM - A lovely poem, Ann ... I remember ET ... a wonderful movie and story :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger October 30, 2019 at 10:17 AM Beautifully done. You have made this come alive, Ann. Ann Gilmour November 2, 2019 at 7:41 PM Bless you dear Caren xx

Panagiota Romios October 22, 2019 at 3:52 AM Dear Ann, this is a FAve, from first word to last! You totally do amaze me,dear one! PR Ann Gilmour October 28, 2019 at 12:28 PM Dear Panagiota, thank you so much my friend and a Fav too - wow! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Robert Lindley October 16, 2019 at 6:12 PM This is a very beautiful interpretation of image number one. Gave cause for me to remember my first ride when a young child, sitting on the handlebars. A fav... love it my friend... Ann Gilmour October 28, 2019 at 12:29 PM Thank you so much Robert for your lovely comments and Fav, such a compliment coming from you and I really appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit October 16, 2019 at 5:27 AM What a lovely interpretation of image 1 Ann--wonderful conversation you depicted between two hearts deeply in love..feels so real and true. Excellent write, Ann. You will certainly win. Ann Gilmour October 16, 2019 at 1:43 PM Oh thank you dear Vijay for your lovely comments. What a lovely idea to soar into the sky and have tea with ET, haha! Thanks for your welcome visit Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx