Hold On

Will you look my way
As today I turn to dust
I ;never again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 5:25 AM
great write!
Poe Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 6:58 PM
My poet, your absence will truly be missed, please write on as your talent touches all souls..... -Alley
Chircop Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 3:30 AM
hold on,dont die poet of the light and dark,i can see a troubled heart and soul,heartfelt emotions,living zombies,buried alive--HOLD ON--you are too young to die --you will survive-----all to dust we have to go,but not yet not now--smile little one:)--great write my french friend------------charma
Higgins Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 5:56 PM
Very strong but haunting write..the second line is done very well..good work.
Shango Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 3:02 PM
That is a sharp retort ... hold on ... let us reflect ... we all will be dust one day, it is great to share while we can ... thanks for reminding me. Bravo
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