Hold On

Will you look my way As today I turn to dust I ;never again

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Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/6/2009 5:25:00 AM

great write!

Alley Poe

Date: 6/29/2009 6:58:00 PM

My poet, your absence will truly be missed, please write on as your talent touches all souls..... -Alley

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/27/2009 3:30:00 AM

hold on,dont die poet of the light and dark,i can see a troubled heart and soul,heartfelt emotions,living zombies,buried alive--HOLD ON--you are too young to die --you will survive-----all to dust we have to go,but not yet not now--smile little one:)--great write my french friend------------charma

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/26/2009 5:56:00 PM

Very strong but haunting write..the second line is done very well..good work.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/26/2009 3:02:00 PM

That is a sharp retort ... hold on ... let us reflect ... we all will be dust one day, it is great to share while we can ... thanks for reminding me. Bravo