Hold On

Holding on to what he'd got
    he could not reach out for more
 
  And it took so much to just hold on
    naught was left in the store
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Legros Kelley Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Poor guy. There seems to actually be a lot of that going on today, sadly.
Wolf Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Hold, please .... ~ Eternity passes
Hawkins Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 8:47 PM
He may have bitten off a little more than he could chew.
Wolf Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 2:31 PM
He was aiming for the stars, but wound up inhaling CO2 emissions. lol. ~ gw
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