Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Hold Me Tight

don't
               release 
          your hold, babe. 
               let me rest 
                    in your 
                         arms;
                    no place 
               I'd rather 
          be; don't release! 
               cradle me
                    until 
                         I 
                           fall fast 
                       asleep, love. 
                  I long 
             for 
                 peace of 
                     mind.


Waltz Wave Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Emile Pinet
Form: Waltz Wave
Syllables: 1,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,3,4,3,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,1
Date written: 03/12/2023

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K. Parker March 14, 2023 at 2:17 PM Beautiful Edward and I love the image. Fits perfectly with this amazing poem. :) Edward Ibeh April 1, 2023 at 8:46 PM Thank you very much, K:-)

Heidi Sands March 14, 2023 at 6:15 AM This is beautiful Edward. Well expressed :) Edward Ibeh March 14, 2023 at 7:30 AM Thank you very much, Heidi:-)

Speaks Volumes March 13, 2023 at 9:02 PM How many times have so many of us yearned for the caress that lasted as long as the timid fear, the need or the insecurity diminished and faded away. Edward you captured an emotion that lurks inside and escapes to implore for more. The waltz wave just enhanced the score. Best wishes Wendy. Edward Ibeh March 14, 2023 at 7:29 AM Thank you so much for this wonderful feedback and your best wishes, Wendy:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 13, 2023 at 11:04 AM Hello Edwa4d, A very romantic poem. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu March 14, 2023 at 10:22 AM Hello Edward, you are very welcome. edward enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/ Edward Ibeh March 14, 2023 at 7:27 AM Thank you very much, Darlene:-)

Vijay Pandit March 12, 2023 at 11:12 AM Awesome poetry--beating heart of love. Much enjoyed the romantic vibes you convey, Edward. Succinctly delivered with great emotive impact. Edward Ibeh March 12, 2023 at 11:17 AM Thank you very much indeed, Vijay:-)