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Hold Me Once

with cradle kicks and little sobs, when needed love she let me know, smiling would pick little heart throb, “hug you once and then back you go!” early schooling days she would cry, with tearful eyes and sad eyebrows, she would say, as I wiped tears dry, “please hug me once then I shall go!” falling in love and wedding bells, how we all do age, sure and slow, while parting both our hearts did swell, I said ‘hug me once, let you go!’ seasons changed as the days rolled by, she would have baby by next snow, our joys were boundless hopes were high, she held close, said “can’t let you go!” all was well till baby was born, she bled, they couldn’t stop the flow, in my dreams she pleaded next morn, “Mum! love my baby, as loved me so!”
Premier Contest Winner (2) written 05/05/2021 embrace and release contest Unseeking seeker 8 syllables each line PS syllable counter.

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Date: 5/14/2021 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful yet sad story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/14/2021 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Paula! Indeed Sad. But every child birth is a rebirth for the mother!
Date: 5/14/2021 9:24:00 AM
Wonderful storytelling Krish. Each stanza masterfully connected by the changing repetition at the end of stanza as we are taken on a journey through time. This really reached into my heart. Congratulations on your win!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/14/2021 9:52:00 AM
Sam, my friend, thanks very much!! Delighted to hear from you!
Date: 5/13/2021 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/13/2021 10:34:00 PM
Thanks Christuraj!
Date: 5/13/2021 10:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for participating and sharing your inspirational poem, congrats on your placement, Krish! Easily at the top of the pack! You surpass yourself!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/13/2021 10:34:00 PM
Thanks Seeker! Honoured! delighted you like it!:)
Date: 5/7/2021 9:02:00 AM
Oh, Lord. What beauty. Must fav this Best wishes, KRISH))) Pangie xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/7/2021 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Pangie! Pleased to have you back and winning!!

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