Hold Me

It's summer here now
as the clouds float by drifting
gripping roots hold me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 8, 2009 at 5:47 PM
Glad the suggestion worked for you. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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August 8, 2009 at 12:38 PM
What an interesting perspective in this concise poem. I really like the last line though maybe gripping roots hold me may flow a bit better. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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July 7, 2009 at 8:02 AM
Great write! I agree with Frances!
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July 5, 2009 at 9:01 AM
If this one is in the Haiku comp, Kris, you're the one to beat! Congratulations already, Frances
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