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Hold Me

It's summer here now as the clouds float by drifting gripping roots hold me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2009 5:47:00 PM
Glad the suggestion worked for you. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/8/2009 12:38:00 PM
What an interesting perspective in this concise poem. I really like the last line though maybe gripping roots hold me may flow a bit better. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/7/2009 8:02:00 AM
Great write! I agree with Frances!
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Date: 7/5/2009 9:01:00 AM
If this one is in the Haiku comp, Kris, you're the one to beat! Congratulations already, Frances
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