Hold

From your lips
To Gods ears
You told me 
All your fears

You told me 
What you feel
Every moment
That's ever real

I told you why 
I loved you so
You told me 
To never let go

I held on with all
All of my might
But when you slipped
Out of sight

In that moment
Then I knew
Into the water 
I’d followed you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 11, 2010 at 8:02 AM
wow how sweet of a poem! your titles draw me in and i love your writing it is very heart felt and emotional and it is really something when someone can relate to your poetry on an emotional level, it's a gift, you've been given by somone. =) jo
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September 16, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Love is a strong bond.
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