Hmmmmmm....?

My heart is
bumping, thumping
jumping all around

I feel like
dancing, singing
running round n round

I can't stop
giggling, laughing
smiling all around

None can imagine
how I feel
something has happen
that doesn't seem real

A new something
I think I've found
that makes me want 
to jump off the ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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De La Keur Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 4:40 PM
Wonderful write, made me think of being a little girl. Brings back lots of memories....Aleera
Chircop Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 11:13 PM
its love love,lovely write,you make me feel like singing out -love
Rhinem Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 8:24 PM
Smile~Well, I hope its kind of like love? Or even better?~"Hello Gifted & Dear Maryam!!!:):)~I sincerely hope that life has been treating 'You & Yours' wonderfully dear!!?:):)~It sounds as though within Your case~something joyous and hopefully beautiful has occured!!?~I truly hope so!!!:):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Yours, John!!!"~Bye Dear Maryam:):)
Devonshire Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 8:15 PM
You must have found love, Maryam!! Love the rhythm in this delightful, uplifting poem!
Shahwan Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 5:52 PM
Fascinating.... Would you pls whisper who came back? or just discovered lost and found?? truly beautiful poetry...all the best.
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April 6, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Creative title. Got a chuckle out of this lighthearted poem. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Karen
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:52 PM
Well, that can't be bad!! Bouncy phrasing a simple straightforward language... sounds like love to me! Best wishes, Keith
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