Notes About The Poem

Hmm

Two smiling faces, aww...looking so sweet 
Wanting to swap...their Halloween treat
Both contemplating, hmm...which one shall I eat 
As they sit on the sofa, with their little smelly feet 


(photo 3.)



Good Luck Halloween Poetry Contest 
Sponsor Eve Roper 
10/31/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Canerdy Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:32 AM
I'm back with a big CONGRATS, Charlie! Janice
Sands Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations for your win Charlie. This is cute :)
Roper Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 11:37 PM
Charles, congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
Messina Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 6:15 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. I am honored to place so high in your contest. This was a fun contest :) Hugs Charlie
There Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 12:11 AM
Lol. This is cute as ever!! hehehe :)
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 1:59 PM
ha ha ha I chose the same pic - I love that end line its so witty:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 8:27 AM
That is exactly what they are doing--so well captured in your poem..all the best, Charles.
Canerdy Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:57 AM
SO CUTE, Charles! Janice
Michael Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 5:46 AM
The dew of innocence still drips from your pen...A very sweet write
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